Dragon Riders: The Battle Forum

A site that was once home to a freeform RPG known as the Battle (casually taking place in Dragon Riders), but now kept for history's sake. Probably.
 
HomePortalCalendarFAQRegisterLog in
Welcome to the forums, Rita de Koningin!
Guest was last online at .
Today is Sat Sep 23, 2017.

Share | 
 

 [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Dr. Time
Moderator of Time
Moderator of Time
avatar

Custom User Title : Angel of Death Join date : 2012-12-17
Posts : 482
Age : 18
Nickname : Timey

Character Sheets
Element: Thunder
Limit Breaks: Volt Overload / Lightning Destruction / Thunder Blast

PostSubject: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Mon Mar 11, 2013 12:00 pm

Okay,I am going to right a story.
But here's the deal.Members will choose what will happen nextThere will be some options,and from them,the first member who'll post needs to make a selection.I'll continue the story depending on your selection.
Remember,I'll only take the selection of the first poster.

And I also have the Story Rep system,so basically,what the protagonist/antagonist/any other char will do,he'll get a rep,either good,evil,or something else...

Main Chars
Protagonist- Jack Lombard
Antagonist- ???

[More will be added later]

Sub-Chars
Jack's Best friend- Zack Reas
[Will be added later]

The Nine Legendary Clans-
1.Maile Tribe- Home- Illumi Forest
Masters of stealth and spying
???

(More as the story goes on)

Guest Appearances!

Okay,the following chars will be based upon some members here.But remember,
members won't control their chars.They will simply make appearances along the story.

Member
Shane - As Shane (Class-Fighter)
Kim - As Kim (Class-Spy)
Bla Bla Bla 44 - As The Bla guy Razz (Class-Normal Human)
Kushagrajaink - As Kush (Class- 5th Elemental)
KarjamP - As Elemental PK
Mvskoke- As Colt.

[I may add more later]

FOR THOSE WHOSE NAMES ARE ABOVE

PM me with the following things you want for your char.
(Template)

Type of Class- (For example, Necromancer,Paladin,Thief,etc.)
Age-
(Optional) Height-
(Optional) Weight-
Hometown-
Bio-
Karma Rating- (Good or Evil)

Quickly complete it,thanks!

Shane- Template received. Shane's First appearance- Post 10
Kim- Template received. Kim's First appearance- Post 10
Bla Bla Bla 44- Template received.
Kushagrajaink- Template received.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Current rep (Blue-Good,Red-Evil)- +120/-120

And why is the name "Legends of El'garg"? Because the name of the world in this story is El'garg.And everything else pretty much explains itself.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Let's begin.

Location- Dream World..

*Thud* *Thud*
Jack- (His vision blurs)" Wha-?"
*Thud* *Thud*
Jack-"What is that noise?"
Jack stumbles across the total blackness,not knowing what to do or where he is..
Suddenly the entire environment began changing.There was a sudden bright light,which made Jack close his eyes and cover them with the back of his hand.When he opened his eyes,he found himself in a room,full of bloodstains.
Across the room,there was a closed door which led to another room,which Jack realized was the source of the entire noise.

Jack-"I must be dreaming..."
"Should I investigate?"

___________________________________________________

What will Jack do?

1. Go investigate the room [Good rep] <----SELECTED
2. Don't investigate [Evil rep]
3. Investigate bloodstains [??]
4. TRY TO WAKE YOURSELF FROM THIS DREAM! [??]

___________________________________________________

So,dear members,choose what will be next!
Oh and don't forget the PMs for the members I listed above!

_________________

Might as well stop by sometime...


v-Sig by me


Dr. Time's THE BATTLE Character Sheets | Dr. Time's RPG Character Sheet (Tome of Knowledge)


Last edited by Dr. Time on Mon Mar 18, 2013 12:13 pm; edited 6 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
KarjamP
Moderator of Kindness
Moderator of Kindness
avatar

Join date : 2012-12-16
Posts : 1478
Age : 22

Character Sheets
Element: Heart
Limit Breaks: Rejuvenating Heart / No More Caring / Power of Heart

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Mon Mar 11, 2013 8:53 pm

Sounds like a storytelling-based RPG that people can say what you want your character to do and then you tell the others what happened when you did it.

So therefore, moved.

Even if this isn't an RPG, it would STILL be under the game's subforums due to the fact that it's a game.

_________________

I'm "KarjamP", with a P, not "Karjam". Razz


Join Dropbox!



Back to top Go down
View user profile
Mvskoke
Hero
Hero
avatar

Join date : 2012-12-17
Posts : 370
Age : 30
Nickname : Mvskoke

Character Sheets
Element: Wind
Limit Breaks: Aeroblivion / Whirlwind Whip / Quad Tornado

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Mon Mar 11, 2013 10:42 pm

Its a text adventure

1
Back to top Go down
View user profile
KarjamP
Moderator of Kindness
Moderator of Kindness
avatar

Join date : 2012-12-16
Posts : 1478
Age : 22

Character Sheets
Element: Heart
Limit Breaks: Rejuvenating Heart / No More Caring / Power of Heart

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Tue Mar 12, 2013 8:41 am

In other words, it's a type of RPG, as others dictate what the characters do, and you dictate the outcome.

If Shane or Kim thinks I made a mistake moving it here, then they can either create a "text adventure" subforum or move this to "games".

Offtopic is not appopriate for this if there are already categories where this can go to.

_________________

I'm "KarjamP", with a P, not "Karjam". Razz


Join Dropbox!



Back to top Go down
View user profile
Kushagra
Fifth Elemental Prince
Fifth Elemental Prince
avatar

Custom User Title : Potatolord of the potatoes Join date : 2012-12-21
Posts : 1041
Age : 15
Nickname : Kush

Character Sheets
Element: The Fifth Element
Limit Breaks: C-Funnel Burst / Gransa Cannon / Elemental Overdrive

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Tue Mar 12, 2013 11:24 am

Can I not be in this game? I would like it but if it is really necessary I'll do it.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dr. Time
Moderator of Time
Moderator of Time
avatar

Custom User Title : Angel of Death Join date : 2012-12-17
Posts : 482
Age : 18
Nickname : Timey

Character Sheets
Element: Thunder
Limit Breaks: Volt Overload / Lightning Destruction / Thunder Blast

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Fri Mar 15, 2013 12:45 pm

It's all right Kush,if you don't want to.
Recieved Shane's,Kim's and Bla's templates.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good rep received! +50

Jack mustered all his courage and opened the door -!
There was a blinding light,followed by a loud,high-pitched scream!
...
*Thud*
Jack,"Ow.."
He realized that he had fallen from his bed!And had hurt himself..
Jack,"Rotten luck..."
"Well,better get ready and meet up with Zack"
A few minutes later,he was off,and awkwardly had forgotten to have his breakfast!
He strolled across his neighborhood,to meet up with Zack in the nearby forest called Illumi Forest.

Now till Jack reaches the forest,let's discuss about the forest,shall we?
The Illumi Forest,is said to be the birth place of the Maile Tribe,one of the Nine Legendary Clans,specializing in Wood-Style attacks.Masters in spying and stealth,they are a force to be reckoned with.
The forest is one of the greatest ever known,with trees stretching as far as the eye can see.

Ah,looks like Jack has arrived.Let's continue now.
Jack found his best friend Zack waiting for him.
They were doing the usual talk when suddenly they heard cries of help in the voice of an elderly lady!
They rushed to where the sound was coming from.Then,while hiding behind a bush,they saw the cause.

Two bandits were trying get some money out of the woman!

Zack-"We've got to help her"
"And the bandits have not spotted us.We'll have the element of surprise."
Jack-*grins*"And I know Kung-Fu!"
Zack-"...seriously..."
"But shouldn't we plan on what to do first?"
Jack-"..."

_________________________________________________________________________

Decide!

1.Attaaaack!!! [Good rep] <----Chosen
2.Plan first!(May affect the conditions of the woman,if taken too much time) [???]
3.Leave in cold-blood. [Evil rep]

_________________________________________________________________________

First post updated!

_________________

Might as well stop by sometime...


v-Sig by me


Dr. Time's THE BATTLE Character Sheets | Dr. Time's RPG Character Sheet (Tome of Knowledge)


Last edited by Dr. Time on Sun Mar 17, 2013 6:11 am; edited 1 time in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Cosette
Hero
Hero
avatar

Custom User Title : Iris Heart ~ Plutia Join date : 2013-02-26
Posts : 713
Age : 21
Nickname : The Eternal Oblivion EX, Cos

Character Sheets
Element: Poison
Limit Breaks: Toxic Flower / Toxic Sun / Poison Gas Explosion

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Fri Mar 15, 2013 4:42 pm

I'd like to attack, please. Option 1!
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dr. Time
Moderator of Time
Moderator of Time
avatar

Custom User Title : Angel of Death Join date : 2012-12-17
Posts : 482
Age : 18
Nickname : Timey

Character Sheets
Element: Thunder
Limit Breaks: Volt Overload / Lightning Destruction / Thunder Blast

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Sun Mar 17, 2013 6:25 am

Good rep received! +30


"HAYAAAAH!"
Zack and Jack jump out of the bush to attack the two bandits!
What they failed to notice was that one of them had a knife in his hand!
But now they did,and they stopped dead in their tracks.
And unfortunately,the bandits now knew about their presence..

Zack,(whispers)"Told you to plan first,moron"
Jack,(SHOUTS)"Let the old lady go!"
Bandit 1 "Well,well...two babies in a forest? Lost?"
Zack,"Let her go,or else.....my friend knows Kung Fu!"

Jack looks at Zack and says,(whispers)"That was just a BLUFF"
Zack, Sweatdrop "We're DOOMED "

Suddenly an arrow flew out of nowhere,and hit Bandit No. 1!He fell down dead!
Bandit 2,"Wha-? Who's there?"
???-"Let Lady Losgers go.."
??? 2-"Or you will have the same fate."
Bandit 2- "Ugh...I'm not scared of you! Come on!"
??? 3-"So be it"

*Thud*
Bandit 2 fell down dead too!

Zack,(whispers)"Jack!I don't know what's going on here,but maybe we should make a run for it."
"They might attack us too."
Jack,"..."

__________________________________________________________________
Options!

1."No,we should not run." (???)
2."Let's go! RUN!!! (???)
3.(SHOUTS)"OH GREAT AND NOBLE MYSTERIOUS PEOPLE! WE ARE YOUR SERVANTS!" (???)

4."No,I won't leave till we check on the old lady" (Good rep) <---Chosen
5."We can defeat those unknown people!We are much stronger!" Try and attack them. (Evil rep)
______________________________________________________________________________________________

_________________

Might as well stop by sometime...


v-Sig by me


Dr. Time's THE BATTLE Character Sheets | Dr. Time's RPG Character Sheet (Tome of Knowledge)


Last edited by Dr. Time on Mon Mar 18, 2013 11:27 am; edited 2 times in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Kushagra
Fifth Elemental Prince
Fifth Elemental Prince
avatar

Custom User Title : Potatolord of the potatoes Join date : 2012-12-21
Posts : 1041
Age : 15
Nickname : Kush

Character Sheets
Element: The Fifth Element
Limit Breaks: C-Funnel Burst / Gransa Cannon / Elemental Overdrive

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Sun Mar 17, 2013 6:49 am

4, And I sent you the template.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dr. Time
Moderator of Time
Moderator of Time
avatar

Custom User Title : Angel of Death Join date : 2012-12-17
Posts : 482
Age : 18
Nickname : Timey

Character Sheets
Element: Thunder
Limit Breaks: Volt Overload / Lightning Destruction / Thunder Blast

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Mon Mar 18, 2013 12:12 pm

OK,Kush,I've added yours.
Intros of Shane and Kim!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Good rep received! +40


Jack-"No,I need to first check on Lady Losgers or whatsoever that old woman's name is"
Zack,"Alrighty then.But I have a deep bad feeling about this.."


Jack and Zack (J and Z for short) move towards the old woman,who appeared to be hurt.

???-"Get away from her"
??? 2-"Now."
Jack-"NO!I'll first check on her,I won't go around on your stupid commands!"
??? 3-"Hmph..kill them too"

........


Meanwhile in another part of the country,near a lake.
Two people appeared to be fishing.

Shane-"Dangnabbit! I haven't caught a single fish!"
Kim-"Oh come on Shane.You need patience.We've hardly been here for 10 minutes!"
Shane-"But it feels like HOURS"


While these two settle their "quarrel",let's have a short intro about these chars,Shane and Kim.
(Straight out of the PM to me.)
Shane wrote:

Shane is a skilled video gamer, and also memorized 756 out of boredom in Maths class in June 2010. Very little is known about him, as he is a shy person. Shane has 29 fears, most of which are perplexing. He believes that everybody hates him, because nobody in his hometown likes him and they try to hurt him - or kill him.

Minor tweaks (Hope you don't mind,Shane)-He moved to the country of El'garg because of the eternal torture done to him.

Kim wrote:

Kim is a young human girl who has allergies to latex. Her real name is Taylor Smith. She is a shy girl.

Minor tweaks (Hope you don't mind too,Kim)-Kim is one Shane's best friends,and she decided to pay him a visit,to El'garg.

Alrighty then,let's continue.

Shane-"GAH!"
Shane throws the fishing pole down beside him.
Kim-"Oh for the love of God!"

Shane and Kim are both skilled.Kim in spying,and Shane in fighting.So advanced are their skills,the King of El'garg recruited them.
Suddenly the sky darkened,and the water started whirling around.Round and round and round.
A huge head popped out of the water,the head of a gi-normous sea creature.

Sea Creature-or-whatever-it-is "ROARRR!"

Kim-"What-"
Shane-"The-"
Sea Creature-or-whatever-it-is-" ROARR!"

__________________________________________________

No rep will be provided from any of the actions this time.

1.Fight the damn creature.Two VS One,what are the odds,right?RIGHT?!
2.RUN!!
3.Try to make friends with the creature.
4.Continue your fishing.Ignore the beast.
5.Scream and cry for help.
__________________________________________________________________________

_________________

Might as well stop by sometime...


v-Sig by me


Dr. Time's THE BATTLE Character Sheets | Dr. Time's RPG Character Sheet (Tome of Knowledge)
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Kushagra
Fifth Elemental Prince
Fifth Elemental Prince
avatar

Custom User Title : Potatolord of the potatoes Join date : 2012-12-21
Posts : 1041
Age : 15
Nickname : Kush

Character Sheets
Element: The Fifth Element
Limit Breaks: C-Funnel Burst / Gransa Cannon / Elemental Overdrive

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Mon Mar 18, 2013 12:40 pm

1
Back to top Go down
View user profile
KarjamP
Moderator of Kindness
Moderator of Kindness
avatar

Join date : 2012-12-16
Posts : 1478
Age : 22

Character Sheets
Element: Heart
Limit Breaks: Rejuvenating Heart / No More Caring / Power of Heart

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Mon Mar 18, 2013 5:03 pm

Define what you mean by "Elemental PK"?

While I have a canon PK, I don't mind derivatives. Razz

_________________

I'm "KarjamP", with a P, not "Karjam". Razz


Join Dropbox!



Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dr. Time
Moderator of Time
Moderator of Time
avatar

Custom User Title : Angel of Death Join date : 2012-12-17
Posts : 482
Age : 18
Nickname : Timey

Character Sheets
Element: Thunder
Limit Breaks: Volt Overload / Lightning Destruction / Thunder Blast

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Tue Mar 19, 2013 12:03 pm

@KarjamP- Well,actually his name IS PK,but he'll be some sort of Elemental spirit,sort of thingy.So...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Shane-"Hey you! Stupid creature! Yeah..you! I'll finish you off here and now!"
Kim-"I don't think we have a chan-"
Shane-"NONSENSE!We'll take it down!"

Shane lunges forward to attack the beast!
As he was about to hit it,something hit HIM and he went flying across the shoreline!

*Thud*
Shane-"Ow..."
"What the hell hit me?"
As he looked towards the monster,he couldn't believe his eyes.
There wasn't just ONE head,there were-
Shane-"One..Two...Three...Four...Five?!!!!"
"Five Heads!"
Kim-(SHOUTS)"Shane!I know what it is!"
"It's a-"
Shane-"Hydra.."


Hydras,maybe you all know,has five heads.The middle one breathes fire.
Cut off one head,out springs 2 more.
But unlike myths,Hydras are plenty in El'garg,mainly causing destruction throughout the country.
So,if you see a Hydra here,well,it's not something rare.



Shane-"Oh cool!Now I'll have something more to add in my achievements!"
Shane dashes forward again,this time managing to dodge three attacks from the heads.
But he forgot about the fire-breathing one!
A shot of flame,and Shane was forced to retreat.

Shane-"Ok,this is going to be difficult"
Meanwhile,the idle Hydra head had turned it's attention towards Kim.
Kim-"Oh shipwrecksauce"

The Hydra Head lunges towards her,but she manages to get away quickly.
Hydra Head-"ROARRR!"

Shane-"Oookay, I need to destroy this one quick,or it will destroy the nearby village."
"But how the hell did it get here?Hydras are normally found near the ocean."
"Anyways,maybe I should get away and take Kim with me,she may get hurt too."
"Or maybe fight it together?"

_________________________________________________________________________________

1. Take Kim and RUN!!
2. Try to fight it
3. Get away and investigate where it had come from.
4. Retreat and get help,with or without Kim.
_________________________________________________________________________________

_________________

Might as well stop by sometime...


v-Sig by me


Dr. Time's THE BATTLE Character Sheets | Dr. Time's RPG Character Sheet (Tome of Knowledge)
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Mvskoke
Hero
Hero
avatar

Join date : 2012-12-17
Posts : 370
Age : 30
Nickname : Mvskoke

Character Sheets
Element: Wind
Limit Breaks: Aeroblivion / Whirlwind Whip / Quad Tornado

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Tue Mar 19, 2013 3:18 pm

2.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Dr. Time
Moderator of Time
Moderator of Time
avatar

Custom User Title : Angel of Death Join date : 2012-12-17
Posts : 482
Age : 18
Nickname : Timey

Character Sheets
Element: Thunder
Limit Breaks: Volt Overload / Lightning Destruction / Thunder Blast

PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   Sat Mar 23, 2013 6:19 am

Guys I'm going away for some time.
As said in >>this thread<<. annd view post number 7.
Until further notice,this thread is frozen.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: [STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]   

Back to top Go down
 
[STORY] The Legends of El'garg [Member's Choice of continuation!]
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Toy Story LEGO + MATTEL WWE
» MARVEL LEGENDS ARES WAVE IN AUSTRALIA
» Is death essential to good story writing?
» New member shout out
» Campaign Story Challenge : ERA, "The Mass" Story

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Dragon Riders: The Battle Forum :: Role-Playing :: Other RPGs-
Jump to: